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unlucky

by rosiebailey

Member since 2002 · Posted 15 Oct 2002 · 4 comments

i was attacked by a man who had a van he drove over me as i was stung by a bee a man came to help but only stole my purse so now i lie there getting eaten by a bear

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4 comments

[n/a] Christof 15-Oct-02/7:52 AM Reply
You could at least have rhymed the third couplet! You have an unfortunate life. Are you still a man?
[7] Tintagiles 16-Oct-02/7:03 PM Reply
This vaguely reminds me of an opposite version of Ogden Nash's 'Adventures of Isabel' (if that's what it's called, can't quite recall). Maybe it's the bear.
[5] blackball 25-Nov-02/12:22 AM Reply
damn dude...that blows for you
[8] horus8 29-Nov-02/3:49 PM Reply
voltaire.