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unlucky (Free verse) by rosiebailey i was attacked by a man
who had a van
he drove over me
as i was stung by a bee
a man came to help
but only stole my purse
so now i lie there
getting eaten by a bear
Up the ladder:
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Down the ladder:
Ah! That Love Would'st Lead Me
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Posted: October 15, 2002 2:20 AM PDT; Last modified: October 15, 2002 2:20 AM PDTWeighted score: 3.8 Overall Rank: 13494 Comments:
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Christof @ 195.172.133.226
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15-Oct-02/7:52 AM
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You could at least have rhymed the third couplet! You have an unfortunate life. Are you still a man?
This vaguely reminds me of an opposite version of Ogden Nash's 'Adventures of Isabel' (if that's what it's called, can't quite recall). Maybe it's the bear.
damn dude...that blows for you
voltaire.
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