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unlucky (Free verse) by rosiebailey

i was attacked by a man who had a van he drove over me as i was stung by a bee a man came to help but only stole my purse so now i lie there getting eaten by a bear

Christof 15-Oct-02/7:52 AM
You could at least have rhymed the third couplet! You have an unfortunate life. Are you still a man?




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