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voluntary, premature expulsion of fetal tissue (Free verse) by skaskowski
darkness
as the walls contract
suspended in liquid
empty consciousness
Contractions force unwanted flesh aside
The earth expels another budding
life
spiraling down...
cold, stagnant air stings underdeveloped lungs
a
hard concrete floor to slip and slide upon
until death's blanket blocks
flourescent light
muscular spasms beat the head against the ground...
pain and blood
pain and blood
piercing pain, and slippery blood
drying
sticky
turning brown,
Pain becomes a final handle.
Slipping life,
slipping life,
popping, crunching, breaking bones;
Bring the light
Kill
the night,
a shattering scream putrefies
this ignorant chunk of
infected delight
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6470587
Weighted score: 3.8083334
Overall Rank: 13492
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:14 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:14 AM PST
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