poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on voluntary, premature expulsion of fetal tissue by skaskowski.

anonymous2 Jul 2001

"contractions force unwanted flesh aside" breaks the mood that I felt gathering -- it makes everything a bit less immediate, narrated as opposed to experienced. and it was kinda downhill from there, really. "milk and blood, blood and milk... a family of four... a family no more..."