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Life Of Sorrow (Other) by squall1leonheart Why is life so full of sorrow?Why do people feel rejected,hurt,crushed
as if they were nothing?Why are people so depresed,angry at themselfs,
and fell like they have no meaning?Why is life so full of sorrow?Why
cant people see inside themselfs,find there courge and heart?Why cant
life be more interrestig to the people like this?They wonder if they
will ever over come this problem,but I am sad to say they will not see
the light at the end of the tunnel.As these people sit and wonder they
also know that they will not see the light.Even though I am not one of
these people,I sometimes feel like them depressed,sad,feel like I am
destroyed.Even as I look at every thing I have,I wonder if I will ever
be like this.And I know it will never happen.Soon i relize that anything
is posoble.
Up the ladder:
Sex
Down the ladder:
Girlz
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Posted: September 25, 2002 1:50 PM PDT; Last modified: September 25, 2002 1:50 PM PDTWeighted score: 3.4853566 Overall Rank: 13606 Comments:
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INTRANSIT @ 152.163.188.228
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25-Sep-02/4:48 PM
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Yes, line breaks. Another good topic. Take heart, you're not like them if you're asking "why". Keep trying but...BREATHE!
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squall1leonheart @ 64.12.96.234
> INTRANSIT
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11-Oct-02/8:43 PM
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hello people my new email is squall4leonheart@aol.com thanx
Is the one very long line deliberate? It is a provocative move that attacks our bourgeois expectations. I think the deliberate spelling mistakes create a sense of naivety that is appealing.
my prediction's...this will be the pile of shite at number three on the worst list in two months...just a prediction.
a most annoying reading experience
my fingers hurt from so much scrolling pah bug shvu madif
themselfs should be them-damn-shelves, courg should be porridge, interrestag shoulde be the 'stag of longevity', and w should be pooter out also it should be more spontaneous and less thought out. try more funk in the vagina, or a nice flesh eating bacteria.,
Pathetic
okay first of all why ask why so damn much... we cant define every aspect of life... second off if your not "one of these peolpe" why write about it... and last but not least, dont sit there on your pedestal and judge people because they are depressed... its not your place to say that they will never see the light, so if you arent like "those people" then write about something you actually know about .... thanks!!!
wow man you need to stop writing poetry and go speak to someone
DICTIONARY make friends with it. Other then that I think the poem could have been formatted better. It was OK. I'll give you a 5.
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