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Life Of Sorrow (Other) by squall1leonheart

Why is life so full of sorrow?Why do people feel rejected,hurt,crushed as if they were nothing?Why are people so depresed,angry at themselfs, and fell like they have no meaning?Why is life so full of sorrow?Why cant people see inside themselfs,find there courge and heart?Why cant life be more interrestig to the people like this?They wonder if they will ever over come this problem,but I am sad to say they will not see the light at the end of the tunnel.As these people sit and wonder they also know that they will not see the light.Even though I am not one of these people,I sometimes feel like them depressed,sad,feel like I am destroyed.Even as I look at every thing I have,I wonder if I will ever be like this.And I know it will never happen.Soon i relize that anything is posoble.

SweetJuliet10 13-May-04/10:20 PM
okay first of all why ask why so damn much... we cant define every aspect of life... second off if your not "one of these peolpe" why write about it... and last but not least, dont sit there on your pedestal and judge people because they are depressed... its not your place to say that they will never see the light, so if you arent like "those people" then write about something you actually know about .... thanks!!!




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