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Life Of Sorrow (Other) by squall1leonheart

Why is life so full of sorrow?Why do people feel rejected,hurt,crushed as if they were nothing?Why are people so depresed,angry at themselfs, and fell like they have no meaning?Why is life so full of sorrow?Why cant people see inside themselfs,find there courge and heart?Why cant life be more interrestig to the people like this?They wonder if they will ever over come this problem,but I am sad to say they will not see the light at the end of the tunnel.As these people sit and wonder they also know that they will not see the light.Even though I am not one of these people,I sometimes feel like them depressed,sad,feel like I am destroyed.Even as I look at every thing I have,I wonder if I will ever be like this.And I know it will never happen.Soon i relize that anything is posoble.

Brittanyy 6-Jul-04/10:45 AM
DICTIONARY make friends with it. Other then that I think the poem could have been formatted better. It was OK. I'll give you a 5.




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