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THE HIT (Free verse) by Torok
I take the hit
The mind swims
The body paralysed
So this is euphoria?
If so i never want to leave this cacoon of smoke and ash
I attempt to speak but the silence overpowers me
Everything makes sense, the trees, the sky, the body and soul and the
numbness of my mind
Hours pass
Minutes seep into history
Its my turn again
I take the hit and collapse into a heap on the floor
No movement apart from the mind
I smile
I think
Another wasted day. Wasted
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5763
Posted: June 22, 2004 12:10 PM PDT; Last modified: June 22, 2004 12:10 PM PDT
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