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happiness prescribed (Free verse) by erickvisions
They say happiness was once hard to come by But its now in a capsule Easy to swallow And impossible to trace Benzodiazipine, riddilin, heroin Give substance to our lives Happiness Prescribed

Up the ladder: Bread and blackthorns
Down the ladder: Snorting the Cosmic Dust.

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5834
Posted: September 11, 2004 11:17 PM PDT; Last modified: September 11, 2004 11:17 PM PDT
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[7] LintyWeenis @ 205.188.117.13 | 12-Sep-04/1:10 PM | Reply
True.
[7] Bachus @ 24.130.62.63 | 13-Sep-04/3:19 PM | Reply
Heroin kicks ass
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