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Free verse № 137030

Where the Hell Did I Put My Glasses?

Member since 2003 · Posted 17 Jan 2006 · 3 comments

A pen, paper cup and pair of reading glasses lie fastened to a desk in an old unused trailer. The bonding agent? A 10 year old coffee and sugar concoction fashioned wholly from unsteady hands - hands that plugged away each day at an old keyboard, rummaged files for lost memos and reports and thumbed frantically through obsolete versions of the company phone listing - hands that no longer toil for an annual wage but now steadily hold the daily tabloid at arms length.

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[6] Dovina 17-Jan-06/1:07 PM Reply
Fastened to a desk
in an old unused trailer
a pen and paper cup
read like memoirs,
bound there by concoction
of sugar and ten-year-old coffee.

Written by unsteady hands
on an old keyboard,
and rummaged files for lost reports,
thumbed frantically the company phone listing -
hands that no longer toil for an annual wage
but steadily hold the daily tabloid at arms length.

just a suggestion.
[8] ay deee 17-Jan-06/3:35 PM Reply
a fantastic collection of images....
[n/a] richa 19-Jan-06/1:56 PM Reply
A bit pedestrian. The language needs to be punchier, interesting.