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The Hundredth End (Free verse) by versus_u
When the dusk spitted forth your egocentric air
I plotted against the waters to resume a game of mindless sensation
To reward the senses with free verses and haikus
And alleviate my instinctive pain
Down under
And when the next dawn showered my kisses through a glass wall
With your face on the other side
And your lips locked on its opacity
To let this blood ooze again in your embrace
I will never know
Because down under
My kisses will remain but a patch in your memory
And my pen only a brush of crimson in your book
To steal dots and mimic lines
For me to hold you again despite the wall
With your face on the other side.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5804
Posted: August 11, 2004 12:04 AM PDT; Last modified: August 11, 2004 12:04 AM PDT
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I assume "down under" refers to "inside," but I can't help seeing it as a sexual reference in this context.