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Where the Hell Did I Put My Glasses? (Free verse) by Joe-joe

A pen, paper cup and pair of reading glasses lie fastened to a desk in an old unused trailer. The bonding agent? A 10 year old coffee and sugar concoction fashioned wholly from unsteady hands - hands that plugged away each day at an old keyboard, rummaged files for lost memos and reports and thumbed frantically through obsolete versions of the company phone listing - hands that no longer toil for an annual wage but now steadily hold the daily tabloid at arms length.

richa 19-Jan-06/1:56 PM
A bit pedestrian. The language needs to be punchier, interesting.




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