| Re: a comment on My Time In Jail by Brittanyy |
4-Feb-05/6:22 AM |
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| Re: Oh holy shit by Lucifer |
2-Feb-05/9:13 AM |
"Man if I did what I wanted
It would leave you daunted"
I dunno..Thats the only part I like.
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| Re: Old Friends by sliver |
2-Feb-05/9:00 AM |
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I really like this poem and anyone who says anything bad about it is just jealous because none of their stuff is as good.
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| Re: a comment on My Poison ( Vodka ) by Brittanyy |
2-Feb-05/8:55 AM |
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| Re: Lullaby by Goad |
1-Feb-05/11:40 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Revaluations by Beyond_Dreams |
1-Feb-05/6:42 AM |
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LOL..It depends I suppose..If you were writing a poem about having a tail then that would be fine. But if you wrote about the pain and strife of being born with a tail then that wouldn't be valid because you ( Hopefully ) don't have a tail so you wouldnt know what its like..Can you dig it?
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| Re: Revaluations by Beyond_Dreams |
1-Feb-05/6:21 AM |
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Maybe this poem would be better if you really knew what it was like to be a bum on the streets; But since you don't there really is no heart behind this poem, just some person writing about something they know nothing about..Oh well...Heres a 6.
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| Re: Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams |
1-Feb-05/5:48 AM |
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I hate you so much that I decided to give this poem a 0..Big surprise huh?
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| Re: THE BEST POEM EVER!!!!!! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
31-Jan-05/5:26 PM |
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Wait...what? I...I don't get it..Probably all that weed I smoked earlier..Oh well..I'll grant you with a 10..The rule on this site seems to be that all good poems are confusing with all the big..words..and stuff..anyways...Always pass the dutch to the left..Cuz the right way is wrong..PEACE
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| Re: a comment on My Poison ( Vodka ) by Brittanyy |
3-Nov-04/2:09 PM |
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Poetry to me, isnt about skill it's about expressing yourself in a creative way. I've read through your poems and I really don't think you have any place to say my poem is "Not very good" before you tell me about my knowledge in writing go back and read some of the trash you have written. All writers have their good poems and bad poems...Yes Genius...Even you have bad poems whether you like to admit it or not.
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| Re: a comment on My Poison ( Vodka ) by Brittanyy |
3-Nov-04/6:12 AM |
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Yea..You're probably right..Vodka is flamable tho right?
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| Re: a comment on My Poison ( Vodka ) by Brittanyy |
3-Nov-04/6:10 AM |
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Yea..The funny thing is..I was drunk when I wrote this...And it shows! It shows!!!
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| Re: a comment on My Poison ( Vodka ) by Brittanyy |
3-Nov-04/6:08 AM |
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Wow...Lol..So much anger..Don't get mad at me because your poems suck ass buddy...
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| Re: Old Friends by sliver |
11-Jul-04/8:24 AM |
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I really like this poem..Nuff said.
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| Re: The Sands Of Time by squall1leonheart |
6-Jul-04/10:53 AM |
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How are you writing about wanting to die at 11 years old? You haven't experienced enough to know anything about depression. This poem contradicts the other poem you wrote. In your other poem you talk about how you're not one of those depressed people and in this poem you seem suicidal? Whatever kid.
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| Re: Life Of Sorrow by squall1leonheart |
6-Jul-04/10:45 AM |
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DICTIONARY make friends with it. Other then that I think the poem could have been formatted better. It was OK. I'll give you a 5.
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| Re: -untitled- by althea7 |
6-Jul-04/10:42 AM |
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Ok Well Im glad Im not the only one who didnt get this poem.
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| Re: THE HIT by Torok |
6-Jul-04/10:39 AM |
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Alas! A poem of yours that I actually can relate to and understand!
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| Re: I Shall Fight by Torok |
6-Jul-04/10:37 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Break by Torok |
6-Jul-04/10:35 AM |
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