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My Time In Jail (Free verse) by Brittanyy
My drunk Night At age 15 I had this thing for getting really drunk. But drinking can do some crazy things. Like turn an ugly guy into a hunk. One night I got real hammered. I think it was in December but I was blacked out, how could I remember? They say I broke a mailbox, Chased a burglar that wasn't there, And as they put me in handcuffs I yelled "Take me Coppers! I don't care!" So now I sit in my jail cell, hungover and confused, How the hell did I get here? Where the fuck are my shoes? Mom and Dad aren't coming, they're pissed that i drank their rum. How could this have happened? God! I feel so dumb! The girl I share a cell with, I think she winked at me, I'm backed into a corner, How can I fight her? Shes bigger than me! Instead she got real close to me and whispered in my ear, "If you got a little money you can get some drugs in here." "I think I got couple bucks what is that gunna buy me?" "A hit of acid." "Ok get that shit out!" I handed her the money, she handed me the dot, I put it on my tongue and thought "This is way better than pot! Now I sit in my jail cell, watching movies on the wall, I guess jail isn't such a bad place after all.

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.4
Weighted score: 4.9284782
Overall Rank: 9370
Posted: February 2, 2005 11:17 PM PST; Last modified: February 3, 2005 8:35 PM PST
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Comments:
[8] jessicazee @ 152.163.100.135 | 3-Feb-05/11:42 PM | Reply
Love the line about your shoes.
[5] Bluemonkey @ 170.141.68.99 | 4-Feb-05/6:20 AM | Reply
Who says "coppers"? What are you living in a 1930's crime saga?
[n/a] Brittanyy @ 64.12.117.5 > Bluemonkey | 4-Feb-05/6:22 AM | Reply
I was that night...
[n/a] Stephen Robins @ 213.146.148.199 > Brittanyy | 4-Feb-05/8:30 AM | Reply
dimtard.
[7] cowmoo @ 129.133.4.35 | 6-Feb-05/12:51 PM | Reply
love it.
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