| Re: Girlz by liljsmith87 |
6-Jul-04/10:33 AM |
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As weird as this may seem I think this poem, if edited properly could have some potential. I don't know why people have to be so vicious in their comments though I mean hey, at least you gave it your best shot huh? Be constructive people!!
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| Re: Barometric pressure & true love (The prince of storms) by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
4-Jul-04/6:07 PM |
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I don't know why anyone would give this poem anything below a ten. Very good.
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| Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
4-Jul-04/6:04 PM |
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I dont know who in their right mind would even consider giving THIS poem a 10..It's pure garbage..Thats all I can say..You Suck and Your Poem Sucks.. -0-
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| Re: The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
4-Jul-04/6:00 PM |
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Hmm well..This poem is so bad it makes me feel better about my poems and for that I will grant you a...-5-
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| Re: Oh No! by foothangingoutofass |
4-Jul-04/5:55 PM |
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Ok this poem was just a bad attempt to be funny and well...It's not..Nice try champ better luck next time..
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| Re: Beloved Infidel by ObiWonKn |
19-Jun-04/8:32 AM |
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Ok, this poem was just a bad excuse to use big words..Haha..That wasnt very nice of me to say but..It was OK so I will grant you a -7-
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| Re: A Flower for Monet by Shuushin |
18-Jun-04/11:41 PM |
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This is one of the few poems that I think actually deserves to be in the top 20. Wait, does that make sense? Oh well..Great job!
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| Re: Afraid by Brittanyy |
1-Oct-03/6:58 PM |
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| Re: Afraid by Brittanyy |
1-Oct-03/6:54 PM |
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| Re: The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
23-Sep-03/3:58 PM |
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And you say nmy poetry is lame? Well well well...I have noticed that about 99.9% of your poetry is on the bottom 20 list and mine is well..not..You can take you comments and shove them straight up your no talent ass you fucking hipocrit..
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| Re: In the Cold Waste by razorgrin |
22-Sep-03/7:00 PM |
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Well that was a complete waste..Why don't you do us all a favor and go jump off a cliff. I can literally feel my brain frying as I read the garbage you call haiku..You call me talent-less? Yea riiiiight..I'm the worlds greatest compared to this shit. Go to hell and die, you have no right to critisize my work..Let me never again see your name disgrace my message boards.
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| Re: killer boredom butterfly (psychedelic) by nentwined |
22-Sep-03/5:54 PM |
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I give it Two thumbs DOWN!!
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| Re: To Mom by Brittanyy |
22-Aug-03/8:58 PM |
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How about you shut your fucking mouth..Did I ever use any names? No..I appreciated the votes you gave me and my comment wasnt directed towards you..Sorry but everything isnt about you so dont diss my shit. And as for lack of communication and self pity? Try getting beat up by your Mom every night and then cussed at between beatings..You dont know me or what I feel so go to hell and die..
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| Re: To Mom by Brittanyy |
22-Aug-03/6:37 PM |
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I only wish that you people would be a little more mature..I mean if you really understood anything you wouldnt feel the need to mock my poem but oh well I suppose..Dont leave a comment if you aren't going to vote!
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| Re: great caesar's ghost by bondjedi |
5-Jul-03/8:05 PM |
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| Re: Dance With Me by marvelis |
5-Jul-03/8:04 PM |
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Some of it just...Ahh forget it..Its OK...
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