"You have no right to critisize my work."

If you post your "poetry" on a poetry-ranking site, everyone who reads it has the right to criticise it. If you're such a spineless crybaby you can't take it when people rightly tell you you can't write, maybe interaction with other people isn't for you. Instead, try writing your poetry in a special secret diary with a flying unicorn pony on a rainbow in space on the front where nobody else can read it.

You clearly have no idea what this haiku is about, and you're clearly only attacking it because razorgrin was a meanie to you. You, sir, are a dunce.

not like im one with much taste for haiku, but you shouldnt yammer about anything.. your work isnt great, funny, or anything:

its pseudo-teenage whining. so shut up.