poemranker ::In the Cold Waste by razorgrin

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Haiku № 66509

In the Cold Waste

Member since 2002 · Posted 22 Sep 2003 · 5 comments

Past nightgaunts, Kadath. Sultan within the palace Watch the mask slip off.

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5 comments

[0] Brittanyy 22-Sep-03/7:00 PM Reply
Well that was a complete waste..Why don't you do us all a favor and go jump off a cliff. I can literally feel my brain frying as I read the garbage you call haiku..You call me talent-less? Yea riiiiight..I'm the worlds greatest compared to this shit. Go to hell and die, you have no right to critisize my work..Let me never again see your name disgrace my message boards.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › Brittanyy 22-Sep-03/7:06 PM Reply
"You have no right to critisize my work."

If you post your "poetry" on a poetry-ranking site, everyone who reads it has the right to criticise it. If you're such a spineless crybaby you can't take it when people rightly tell you you can't write, maybe interaction with other people isn't for you. Instead, try writing your poetry in a special secret diary with a flying unicorn pony on a rainbow in space on the front where nobody else can read it.

You clearly have no idea what this haiku is about, and you're clearly only attacking it because razorgrin was a meanie to you. You, sir, are a dunce.
[n/a] razorgrin › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 23-Sep-03/5:53 AM Reply
I was going to respond, but you took the words right out of my mouth, sir.
[10] SupremeDreamer › Brittanyy 22-Sep-03/8:09 PM Reply
not like im one with much taste for haiku, but you shouldnt yammer about anything.. your work isnt great, funny, or anything:

its pseudo-teenage whining. so shut up.
[10] SupremeDreamer 22-Sep-03/8:10 PM Reply
10!!!!