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In the Cold Waste (Haiku) by razorgrin

Past nightgaunts, Kadath. Sultan within the palace Watch the mask slip off.

SupremeDreamer 22-Sep-03/8:09 PM
not like im one with much taste for haiku, but you shouldnt yammer about anything.. your work isnt great, funny, or anything:

its pseudo-teenage whining. so shut up.




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