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The Sands Of Time (Free verse) by squall1leonheart
As I sit here wanting to cry,I find no joy in my life and want to die.I
hear something,I look,and Isee what is to happen to me,for i am lost in
the sands of time.As i walk through the sands of time,in the hourglass
of life,I feel my self start to feel fear grow in my heart,and it seems
i can not go on.And as i gather up my strength,and my courege,I start to
walk agin,and i see a wonderful sight,all that is holy has come to
rescue me,but that sight turns to fear,as I see wickedness aprouch me,
reach for my heart,but the it disapers.I am houlisanating in the sands
of time,And as i walk,wondering if my life would get any better,i wonder
if i can escape this prison of sand,but find no exit.as I sit,rigt here
in the middle of this prision,I no there is no escape.As of now,I know I
will not escape.I know I will die in the sands of time.
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Weighted score: 3.8888888
Overall Rank: 13446
Posted: September 24, 2002 5:07 PM PDT; Last modified: September 24, 2002 5:07 PM PDT
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Sands of time is an excellent subject.I hope you're not really that sad at 11 yrs. Welcome to the pool.8