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Surprise (Free verse) by edge
Birds take flight
Danger lurking near?
Is it me
Or something else they fear.
Shadows fall
Has the darkness come
Does something more sinister
block out the sun?
Leaves crunch
An omonous sound
Hair stands
Someone is around
Axe falls
Connects with a thud
Was it just a tree?
Then why all the blood
Loved one
Stares with vacant eyes
Cake lies on the ground
Oh what a surprise!
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.7777777
Weighted score: 3.8888888
Overall Rank: 13445
Posted: September 22, 2002 10:10 AM PDT; Last modified: September 22, 2002 10:10 AM PDT
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