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Surprise (Free verse) by edge
Birds take flight Danger lurking near? Is it me Or something else they fear. Shadows fall Has the darkness come Does something more sinister block out the sun? Leaves crunch An omonous sound Hair stands Someone is around Axe falls Connects with a thud Was it just a tree? Then why all the blood Loved one Stares with vacant eyes Cake lies on the ground Oh what a surprise!

Up the ladder: i have to go/but canot
Down the ladder: The Sands Of Time

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.7777777
Weighted score: 3.8888888
Overall Rank: 13440
Posted: September 22, 2002 10:10 AM PDT; Last modified: September 22, 2002 10:10 AM PDT
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[5] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 | 23-Sep-02/4:06 AM | Reply
Cake? Is this a joke? I'm baffled
[6] PawnedTidal @ 68.35.210.72 | 30-Sep-02/5:24 PM | Reply
Haha. Surprise ending.
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