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I Shall Fight (Free verse) by Torok Well if God is blind than what does that leave me to see?
If my mind is blank do i cease to be?
If God is love, then am i free?
If i am hated, am i diseased?
For God and for country
For the heart and the soul
For the man and the monkey
For beauty and awe
I shall fight.
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Posted: June 22, 2004 12:13 PM PDT; Last modified: June 22, 2004 12:13 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7711 Comments:
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Shuushin @ 147.154.235.51
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22-Jun-04/1:26 PM
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I like this (well, no crazy about the lowercase "i"'s) - for me it stays on the right side of honest introspection.
Uh....Okayy....
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