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Sorry (Free verse) by XOXScottishgrlXOX
Sometimes I wonder what I would be like with you But now I have found someone new Time can fly and so can you But I'm done loving you You're to late I've found my prince I wish you the best And nothing less For I once cared for you We are drifting apart like a boat slowly leaving from the dock But maybe I will give you a second chance But you just wanted to be friends So I'm done loving you

Up the ladder: Desperation
Down the ladder: Unsung california dreamin.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7699
Posted: August 5, 2005 4:18 PM PDT; Last modified: August 5, 2005 4:18 PM PDT
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[4] Dovina @ 69.175.32.104 | 5-Aug-05/4:42 PM | Reply
I think you are undecided on exactly what it is you want to say to him.
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