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I Shall Fight (Free verse) by Torok

Well if God is blind than what does that leave me to see? If my mind is blank do i cease to be? If God is love, then am i free? If i am hated, am i diseased? For God and for country For the heart and the soul For the man and the monkey For beauty and awe I shall fight.

Shuushin 22-Jun-04/1:26 PM
I like this (well, no crazy about the lowercase "i"'s) - for me it stays on the right side of honest introspection.




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