Re: My Mamma's Hands by amateurR	13-Sep-02/11:41 PM
pragmatic fingernails an interesting phrase but should only be used once ,or if intentionally reversed closer together ... paints a picture of death .... is that right ? .. 4
Re: pissed off pretentious prat by keatsImnot	13-Sep-02/3:35 PM
know whatcha mean .... us poets eh ? how special we are ! ... 4
Re: winter every day (Don't bother reading this) by unknown	13-Sep-02/3:14 PM
ditto ... kinda funny .. 4
Re: Hard Times by beakism	13-Sep-02/3:08 PM
.. like the footprints ( new to me ) ... makes it a concrete poem ? ... w==h==e==e==l==s perhaps ... 4
Re: Mother! by kawakurdi	13-Sep-02/3:05 PM
is this for real ... if so is it suitable for poemranker ... want to bitch , but not to add to your pain ...... 4
Re: Life : Paradox by amateurR	13-Sep-02/2:59 PM
muddled , but then that's life ... is that the word which explains itself ? ... 4
Re: HELP by LIL ZAY	13-Sep-02/2:44 PM
.. yeah , nice and bluesy ... pity 'bout the suspect religiosity ..... 4
Re: Torn... by loneshadow29	13-Sep-02/2:40 PM
the universe does not care about you .... work for your own 'salvation' .... 3
Re: Mermaid at Dawn by <~>	13-Sep-02/2:36 PM
aah , a real poem ... such a relief ... at the end is the questioning form and use of 'elusive ' tautological .... i like the bird ... self contained vs the twosome .... breathing exercises captures it too .... 8
Re: fairy tale by jlanza	13-Sep-02/2:13 PM
poetry by numbers .... should in be with in last line ? or are you in someone elses story
Re: 9/11 by dougsoderstrom	13-Sep-02/2:07 PM
this haiku sure has a lot of syllables .....
Re: constructed word poem #6 by david	12-Aug-02/2:26 PM
ubiquitous in tendency,. mmmmm nice
Re: The Girl Who Wasn't Me by psychedelic	12-Aug-02/2:09 PM
you are indeed alone but i wonder why acid-awareness doesn't make this joyful
Re: Something Strong by Kriss	12-Aug-02/1:55 PM
i dunno where p&k it gets off rubbishing your work ; just read the juvenile garbage he ( i assume ) writes . BUT imho it's not very good. Zinnai66 said it all ... keep on keeping on
Re: Lost Dreams by DirtyKurtsGurl	12-Aug-02/1:42 PM
first 4 lines are brilliant almost rocking but then wimps out into muzak
Re: BEGINNINGS by kawakurdi	11-Aug-02/7:17 AM
slaves do certainly think and zero came along way after big numbers ... some good images .."cold oven" i like
Re: life sucks sometimes..ditto by New Life Drug	10-Aug-02/2:44 PM
.life don't suck,it blows,from stranger quarters than you can possibly know ; self pity doesn't do it , wait a few years til you pity the world then top yourself because of guilt... anyhow, what happened ?
Re: I never Knew..... by SkateBoardGurl5799	10-Aug-02/2:36 PM
.... would be good if it meant something ...
Re: In my weakest hour, I find my true strength by Rainbow_chaser	29-Jul-02/5:38 PM
okay ... it's a concept akin ro rhyme which is more of a slave-master than is meter ... making the sounds fit the syllables .... just think it needs a rewrite
Re: My Angel by mytenderrage	29-Jul-02/5:02 PM
and fluffy clouds even .... my gosh !