Re: a comment on for John by pete	20-Jul-21/1:03 PM
Thanks Jill
Re: a comment on for John by pete	20-Jul-21/1:02 PM
hi yes ; all my stuff(most) works better when performed. Thanks for your thoughts
Re: a comment on The American Soldier by x0lovelylarnx0	28-Oct-07/4:03 AM
oh, you must mean vietnam... youre in cyberspace here, not amerika ... and a lot of people here have too painfully different a view ... this is military triumphalism masquerading as soulfulness ... shame on you and your nation
Re: Soccer by x0lovelylarnx0	19-Oct-07/2:16 PM
ahh ... yes; getting there (ps don't mind me ... i was crap at your age too)
Re: Looking Back by x0lovelylarnx0	19-Oct-07/2:14 PM
i'm sorry but your stuff is really dreadful ....
Re: The American Soldier by x0lovelylarnx0	19-Oct-07/2:13 PM
do you know, or do you want to know, what they are doing?
Re: Life Is Like A Rose by x0lovelylarnx0	19-Oct-07/2:09 PM
god? ... god!
Re: Time Will Change by x0lovelylarnx0	19-Oct-07/2:08 PM
ugh
Re: Henry's breeches by Stephen Robins	19-Oct-07/2:02 PM
poor love, give him a cosolation point
Re: Her name was Marjorie Harper by Caducus	19-Oct-07/1:59 PM
she died a poem and were you god ten would be the score
Re: a comment on Never Let Go by x0lovelylarnx0	18-Oct-07/6:38 PM
excuse me, but you are here for criticism are you not? ... or just to show off ... in poetry often a lot more can be said by fewer words ... don't get so touchy
Re: A double haiku about President Putin by Engelbert Humpalot	18-Oct-07/8:01 AM
cute
Re: Owl Eyes by MacFrantic	18-Oct-07/8:00 AM
dunno why but i like this ... poetry,though... not so sure
Re: The Devil and I by forsaken	18-Oct-07/7:59 AM
re-write once the devil has gone and note the difference
Re: The Friendship Storm by x0lovelylarnx0	18-Oct-07/7:56 AM
too many words
Re: Holding You by forsaken	18-Oct-07/7:54 AM
shows promise
Re: inside the raven by PsydewaysTears	18-Oct-07/7:53 AM
don't he though
Re: RAGTIME by xyz	18-Oct-07/7:52 AM
grow up
Re: This Song by MacFrantic	18-Oct-07/7:51 AM
cop-out saying it's for someone else .... good story tho
Re: Alice to Slumber by Skamper	18-Oct-07/7:48 AM
scary as fuck and somewhat sexy ... or am i reading too much there? .... more tea .... genius