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inside the raven

Member since 2004 · Posted 14 Oct 2007 · 2 comments

The raven sings of wicked things of killer claws and blackened wings but I know where the raven cries because the light inside his eyes reflected me reflected me reflected bluebird blue-filled skies where secrets graze in compromise so many things the raven sings he sings, he sings, he sings, he lies.

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[10] Skamper 14-Oct-07/7:53 PM Reply
nice work - lurking evil in a gently lulling tune... always the trap. :)
[6] pete 18-Oct-07/7:53 AM Reply
don't he though