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Owl Eyes

Member since 2003 · Posted 8 Oct 2007 · 1 comment

She's got big ol' owl eyes, Smells liked sweet grilled onions, And smiles when she ought to cry. "The stage is too small," she says. She's a riot though- Loves courage and formal apologies, Gave me a swingset for my birthday. I watched her chase pigeons in the yard. Oh, she's got big ol' owl eyes, Saucers that bind my tongue. And for that I'd be wrong Just to make her right.

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[5] pete 18-Oct-07/8:00 AM Reply
dunno why but i like this ... poetry,though... not so sure