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Maybe Someday (Villanelle) by darylchew
I am munching on a cookie
You look, and turn away
The world spins on around me
I mutter a phrase out of key
It still feels the same today
I am munching on a cookie
The days turn themselves out on me
The months the years the time
The world spins on around me
Chasing a dream I hardly know anything of
You call me names and bruise my body
I am munching on a cookie
I sing a note, out of, beat
So many faces smirk and stare
The world spins on around me
If it all made any sense, I hope I do
make it clear to you, to you
I am munching on a cookie.
The world spins on around me
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9197
Posted: May 30, 2007 9:31 AM PDT; Last modified: May 30, 2007 9:31 AM PDT
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