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Maybe Someday (Villanelle) by darylchew
I am munching on a cookie You look, and turn away The world spins on around me I mutter a phrase out of key It still feels the same today I am munching on a cookie The days turn themselves out on me The months the years the time The world spins on around me Chasing a dream I hardly know anything of You call me names and bruise my body I am munching on a cookie I sing a note, out of, beat So many faces smirk and stare The world spins on around me If it all made any sense, I hope I do make it clear to you, to you I am munching on a cookie. The world spins on around me

Up the ladder: Greyhound Bus
Down the ladder: Relive the Fifth

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9282
Posted: May 30, 2007 9:31 AM PDT; Last modified: May 30, 2007 9:31 AM PDT
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