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Alice to Slumber (Free verse) by Skamper
I said off with her head! knife slipping... she has alice eyes and a band slicing through her hair oh! sweetie how well your skin fits and crimson glows on peach you know? don't mind them they like to touch - flowers are so pretty just before they bud unbutton yourself we never see your like- so white - delicious - more tea? a laugh - royale it's just a game - dear blade licking - more cake? alice stroking petals curling sure - wiping fingers on her tongue open up and I'll cut you a slice hmmm? how frustrating... baby blue strips sticky- puddles- did she come I didn't know a shredded thing peaked so pinkly did you?

Up the ladder: your wife's pain
Down the ladder: Wrath

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.3333335
Weighted score: 5.62753
Overall Rank: 2200
Posted: October 15, 2007 9:25 PM PDT; Last modified: October 15, 2007 9:25 PM PDT
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[10] INTRANSIT @ 204.110.228.254 | 16-Oct-07/2:56 PM | Reply
zoiks.
[n/a] Skamper @ 58.171.12.113 > INTRANSIT | 19-Oct-07/5:42 AM | Reply
:)
[7] pete @ 62.56.48.109 | 18-Oct-07/7:48 AM | Reply
scary as fuck and somewhat sexy ... or am i reading too much there? .... more tea .... genius
[n/a] Skamper @ 58.171.26.116 > pete | 19-Oct-07/5:43 AM | Reply
I think you got it :)
[8] Ranger @ 86.131.54.245 | 6-Oct-08/4:39 PM | Reply
lol, fantastic.
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