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The Devil and I (Free verse) by forsaken
I've never been good at saying goodbye
The last time i fought with my emotions not to cry
But it's finally time to wave my hand again
Always there you were acting like a true friend
This has to be done for me to move forward
All those nights in the bottle just made me feel more like a turd
As I pour the whiskey down my sink drain
I look up to the mirror and I can hear you in brain
Asking me with the most friendly calm voice, why
Like you're a good friend and you don't want to say goodbye
I then notice the scares on my wrist and remember those nights
When we would have one of our little fights
People would see them and yet I'd always defend you
All cause I didn't have the strength to tell you not to
Well you left me bleeding for the last time
You'd say it was to help with the pain I hold in this heart of mine
I hear you remind me how We've been together through it all
Sure I can always count on you to catch me when I fall
And when I hit the bottom all those years ago
You were the only person I let know
Still it's time to close my eyes
While a part of me goes and dies
Don't expect me to morn for you, no I won't cry
It's about time the devil and I say goodbye
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.266667
Weighted score: 6.9964733
Overall Rank: 95
Posted: October 10, 2007 4:50 PM PDT; Last modified: October 10, 2007 4:50 PM PDT
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