Re: Unmistakably Mistaken by secretlyvulnerable	18-Oct-07/7:45 AM
juvenile ... still, can't knock you for your years
Re: My Courtney by secretlyvulnerable	18-Oct-07/7:44 AM
.... er ... perp or victim ? ( or do you consider yourself both ?) ... nul points ... for the poem alone, that is
Re: Wayne, do you? by T. Jonathron Remp	18-Oct-07/7:38 AM
either a 8 or a 1 ....dunno .... say 5 .... involving, though ... make that 6
Re: Never Let Go by x0lovelylarnx0	18-Oct-07/7:36 AM
too many words
Re: If David Biespiel Wrote A Haiku by Aetius	9-Sep-07/6:02 PM
sol (smiled out loud)
Re: Crotchety Old Geezer by Dovina	17-Aug-07/6:45 AM
innit though ?!
Re: Sunset Beach by amanda_dcosta	8-Aug-07/4:45 PM
puh..leeze
Re: Prescription of Pain by Miggy	8-Aug-07/4:40 PM
a point for "chirp"
Re: I love you by jerzeygirl22	8-Aug-07/4:36 PM
the first stanza here swings along real nice but then the poetry (not necessarily the poetic thoughts) seems to dry up.try the rest using the meter of that ... maybe even let the first stanza stand by itself ... the fewer words, the more a poem can say .:-)
Re: a comment on Another Date by Dovina	6-Aug-07/4:57 PM
god ..... everyboy's crap tonight ..... or is it me? .... will go and rest awhile ..:-)
Re: Another Date by Dovina	6-Aug-07/4:51 PM
and shed a bitter tear
Re: a comment on California Bound by Dovina	2-Aug-07/3:10 PM
lol....hi doylie
Re: a comment on California Bound by Dovina	2-Aug-07/3:10 PM
t'aint so
Re: California Bound by Dovina	26-Jul-07/1:59 PM
funny lot, them religeous
Re: Just Another Reason by Skamper	22-Jun-07/11:54 PM
hi;...yeah; felt exactly the same as jessicazee about the last 3 lines; . the lead up was good enough to deserve much more ... the first 3 lines could in fact stand alone... nice changes of rhythm......7 and a half points
Re: Win, Win, Lose, Lose by Dovina	22-Jun-07/11:46 PM
wow, Dovina; must be yr most powerful poem yet ... tho must admit I've skipped over quite a few;... just a thought... the end i found flat because the symmetry so obviously demanded it; ... I'da skewed it a bit, ... like win, who needs it..or .loss is lost or something; ... but then then....you know;.it's yr poem :-),I'm more of an imperfectionist
Re: Lines and half lines by aliena	18-Jun-07/3:10 PM
...i think she's got it .... a self referential poem that leaps about with brilliant humour ! .......
Re: Just words by aliena	18-Jun-07/3:05 PM
this is something we all go through .... and you did care enough to submit .. in my view a poem of no value except as exercise .... but do you care? .... :-)
Re: Talk by Skamper	15-Jun-07/6:45 AM
well; i think that's nice .... somewhat lacking in something .... getting skampered out catcha later
Re: The Kissing by Skamper	15-Jun-07/6:42 AM
mmmmm .... hardly a zero; nice sexy rhythm to start of but to maintain momentum in a poem is more difficult than in actual sex and images ought to be stronger or the poem shorter .... imho