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Unmistakably Mistaken (Free verse) by secretlyvulnerable
Remember this feeling of hatred inside
Remembering now as I fall down to cry
Tears streaming down my face
There's not a person around
and no place to escape
I can't remember the last time I felt so alone
No place of comfort I have no home
I screw up again with not a single word said
I cry myself to sleep each night in my bed
thinking of life and each step that I take
believing my life is just one big mistake
I've always dreamed of a life full of meaning
A romance worth loving
And words worth speaking
A moment in time
When I know there is hope
I am unmistakably mistaken
And for now I just cope
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9103527
Overall Rank: 9676
Posted: October 15, 2007 11:41 PM PDT; Last modified: October 15, 2007 11:41 PM PDT
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