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Unmistakably Mistaken (Free verse) by secretlyvulnerable

Remember this feeling of hatred inside Remembering now as I fall down to cry Tears streaming down my face There's not a person around and no place to escape I can't remember the last time I felt so alone No place of comfort I have no home I screw up again with not a single word said I cry myself to sleep each night in my bed thinking of life and each step that I take believing my life is just one big mistake I've always dreamed of a life full of meaning A romance worth loving And words worth speaking A moment in time When I know there is hope I am unmistakably mistaken And for now I just cope

pete 18-Oct-07/7:45 AM
juvenile ... still, can't knock you for your years




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