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First Love (Free verse) by pinay_miss_azn
Just because love isn't real doesn't mean that we can't feel what it feels to have the pain the kind that doesn't seem to heal I shed tears from a broken heart tears that just won't seem to stop time goes by very slowly as each drop of my tears fall down...for you Every time I see your face in the hallway or in the frames I had of you... I can't help but think about the happy times we used to share... But I guess since its over now I should forget about all the things involving you and our....first love

Up the ladder: You..
Down the ladder: Voyeur looking glass

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9103527
Overall Rank: 9666
Posted: July 8, 2004 3:27 PM PDT; Last modified: July 8, 2004 3:27 PM PDT
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[6] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 10-Jul-04/5:54 AM | Reply
This AA BB CC is *very* tough to pull off.

Same for the night club act ending.
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