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Haiku № 133759

soon i will travel

by ay deee

Member since 2005 · Posted 18 Nov 2005 · 4 comments

head and pillow meet old friends gather to enact my present routine

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4 comments

[7] Dovina 18-Nov-05/5:19 PM Reply
Good, except for the mundane last line.
[7] zodiac 18-Nov-05/10:16 PM Reply
Agreed.
[4] cyan9 19-Nov-05/4:04 PM Reply
Had to rate this lowly, you've shot yourself in the foot, the fingers, the face and the butt with that last line.
[n/a] eliastemplar 20-Nov-05/6:31 PM Reply
Remember that haiku idealy appeal to multiple senses. Smell, touch, taste, sight, sound.