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California Bound

Member since 2004 · Posted 22 Jul 2007 · 11 comments

In a Utah town I was checked up and down by a sun-bleached, blue-eyed Mormon clown who wanted a second lilywhite wife riding a bike and giving no strife complete with Republican gown

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11 comments

[6] Christof 23-Jul-07/3:30 AM Reply

It's a funny poem, but metrically it ain't no limerick.

[6] pete 26-Jul-07/1:59 PM Reply

funny lot, them religeous

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › pete 30-Jul-07/10:28 AM Reply

that's racist.

[n/a] ==Doylum › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 30-Jul-07/1:42 PM Reply

That is not racist. It is, however, racist to mock the opinions of handsome pete

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › ==Doylum 1-Aug-07/1:54 AM Reply

Only if he's black.

[n/a] ==Doylum › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 1-Aug-07/5:23 AM Reply

Only when he's black. Pete is a wandering menstral.

[6] pete › ==Doylum 2-Aug-07/3:10 PM Reply

lol....hi doylie

[6] pete › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 2-Aug-07/3:10 PM Reply

t'aint so

[6] richa 31-Jul-07/2:17 PM Reply

Not a limerick. A limerick would read more like:

In Utah I was checked up and down
by a sun bleached old mormon clown
he wanted a wife
riding a bike
complete with a republican gown.

[7] lmp 21-Sep-07/9:47 AM Reply

well, maybe if the guv'ment need a new weapons test site, they can move north a bit.

[n/a] Goad 25-Sep-07/9:08 PM Reply

this scans like its writer's on crack
or worse -- is a blundering hack
if you took off your gown
and got down with the clown
you'd make up for your wordsmithing lack