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California Bound (Limerick) by Dovina In a Utah town I was checked up and down
by a sun-bleached, blue-eyed Mormon clown
who wanted a second lilywhite wife
riding a bike and giving no strife
complete with Republican gown
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Posted: July 22, 2007 7:30 PM PDT; Last modified: July 22, 2007 7:30 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7686 Comments:
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Christof @ 62.121.23.56
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23-Jul-07/3:30 AM
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It's a funny poem, but metrically it ain't no limerick.
funny lot, them religeous
that's racist.
That is not racist. It is, however, racist to mock the opinions of handsome pete
Only if he's black.
Only when he's black. Pete is a wandering menstral.
lol....hi doylie
t'aint so
Not a limerick. A limerick would read more like:
In Utah I was checked up and down by a sun bleached old mormon clown he wanted a wife riding a bike complete with a republican gown.
well, maybe if the guv'ment need a new weapons test site, they can move north a bit.
this scans like its writer's on crack
or worse -- is a blundering hack if you took off your gown and got down with the clown you'd make up for your wordsmithing lack 244 view(s)
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