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California Bound (Limerick) by Dovina

In a Utah town I was checked up and down by a sun-bleached, blue-eyed Mormon clown who wanted a second lilywhite wife riding a bike and giving no strife complete with Republican gown

Goad 25-Sep-07/9:08 PM
this scans like its writer's on crack
or worse -- is a blundering hack
if you took off your gown
and got down with the clown
you'd make up for your wordsmithing lack




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