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California Bound (Limerick) by Dovina

In a Utah town I was checked up and down by a sun-bleached, blue-eyed Mormon clown who wanted a second lilywhite wife riding a bike and giving no strife complete with Republican gown

richa 31-Jul-07/2:17 PM
Not a limerick. A limerick would read more like:

In Utah I was checked up and down
by a sun bleached old mormon clown
he wanted a wife
riding a bike
complete with a republican gown.




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