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Lines and half lines (Free verse) by aliena
I tear the sheet
Crumple
Throw
It into a corner.
I try to write
A line
I write
A line
Scratch it out
Write again
Try to write
Scratch it out
Tear out the sheet
Crumple
Throw
It into the corner.
I chew my pen
Think
Of a line
Half a line
A longer line
A complete line
I write
Hesitant
Unsure
Fingers trembling
Expectant
Scared
A word
Half a line
But not a line
I scratch it out
Tear out
The sheet
Crumple
Throw
It into the corner.
The pile
Of crumpled sheets
Containing just
A line
Half a line
mounts steadily.
I am stuck
Cannot think
Of a word
Half a line
A line
Tear out the page
A blank sheet
Like my mind
Blank
Still struggling
For words
Half a line
A complete line.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.857143
Weighted score: 5.230521
Overall Rank: 4235
Posted: November 25, 2003 11:15 AM PST; Last modified: November 25, 2003 11:15 AM PST
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