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What makes you think I want to know you? (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
Sorry but I don't think I like what I see
However you could try and vindicate yourself to me
Prove me wrong, and make me believe that you're something more
Than just a girl on myspace selling her image like a whore
Whose jaw has probably just dropped to the floor?
As a young man spoke arrogant words to start a war
Know that my favorite form of attack
Is a carefully controlled form of tact?
Only digging finger nails in skin deep
Leaving no flesh wounds that will keep
It's all play and merely pretend
And I could make this ride on a merry go round end
As I spin your head in slightly different direction
Letting you see the hint of the strength of my mind's protection
Tsk, Tsk, girl. We haven't met, yet
You haven't introduced yourself and I bet
I haven't the foggiest of ideas what your name is
I think, more than likely you're just a bot for a business
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.857143
Weighted score: 5.230521
Overall Rank: 4231
Posted: September 2, 2006 11:18 PM PDT; Last modified: September 2, 2006 11:29 PM PDT
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