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Rinse (Free verse) by somemorepoetry
Cups slick-shined,
Sinking in the soap,
With wrinkled hands,
Holding and splashing
Beneath the faucet,
Leaking and dripping
Hot water like this
Moment was a ripple
And nothing that happens now
Will ever flow upstream to
Catch us offguard
With our gloves off
Reaching for
Shards of glass
With scalded hands
Through rose-red water,
Spreading and melding.
Still you smile,
Then grimace,
As you grab hold and pull
Breaking for the surface.
Broken glass and rose-red water
Are merely momentary lapses.
You must wash those dishes.
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Posted: February 19, 2004 6:58 PM PST; Last modified: February 19, 2004 6:58 PM PST
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