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Talk (Free verse) by Skamper
his eyes feel
the cold beneath
her shirt
and he works -
orally stripping
tangled strings
with voiced inflections
directed intentions
he removes her things
she resplendent -
eyes defending
but none-the-less warming
responding -
to the timing
of his undressing
she leaves her things
hanging -
on his sweet sounds
he announces -
I touch you
she laughs
Yes â
I felt you...
eyes smiling -
his hands brush the strings
his fingers
tap upon her heart â
there?
No â
she plays...
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5
Weighted score: 4.8814354
Overall Rank: 9965
Posted: April 10, 2007 8:49 AM PDT; Last modified: April 10, 2007 8:49 AM PDT
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