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Talk (Free verse) by Skamper

his eyes feel the cold beneath her shirt and he works - orally stripping tangled strings with voiced inflections directed intentions he removes her things she resplendent - eyes defending but none-the-less warming responding - to the timing of his undressing she leaves her things hanging - on his sweet sounds he announces - I touch you she laughs Yes – I felt you... eyes smiling - his hands brush the strings his fingers tap upon her heart – there? No – she plays... Lower

Skamper 19-Oct-07/5:37 AM
it's lacking playfullness...thanks for reading and taking time to comment... :)




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