Re: View From The Gutter by Skamper	15-Jun-07/6:38 AM
yesterday's primordial soup ... luvvitt ! too many words though (imho)
Re: Empty by Skamper	15-Jun-07/6:34 AM
explanation will often ruin a poem, i know, but is this about an alcoholic suicide or lonesome solitude .... or something else entirely
Re: Llamas by Skamper	15-Jun-07/6:27 AM
slide your new tongue.... nice ...teach me etc .. is this a matchstick page wandering muttering into the surreal landscape
Re: The Finding by Skamper	15-Jun-07/6:23 AM
reads like a wordsmith's musing on an empty-minded sunny sunday afternoon;... will search later for hidden depths, should there be any
Re: Paper Maker by Skamper	15-Jun-07/6:18 AM
yeah, the preposition thing..... found it a bit hard going but was rewarded by the clarity of the final image .... stinging just the same
Re: The Search by Skamper	15-Jun-07/6:10 AM
i felt the 2nd half lacked enough concrete images to hold it together ..... yeah, i did get a bit lost
Re: Bonded by Skamper	14-Jun-07/5:46 PM
wow...lol...catcha later
Re: The Sunnyside of David Uden by lukehanney	7-May-07/4:50 PM
clunky
Re: Castle of Pandas IV by FreeFormFixation	7-May-07/4:48 PM
string band school of creative writing seems like
Re: again it happnes by skaskowski	7-May-07/4:45 PM
... yeah but whats it all mean? and is it Art? :-/... yes I'm sure it is :-)
Re: Worn Ruse by drnick	7-May-07/4:35 PM
fabulous concept not done full justice by this poem
Re: Lustlets of longing by bharat shekhar	7-May-07/4:32 PM
the poetry seemed to dry up after you came;... never mind, ... happens to all of us :-)
Re: The Emperor's new clothes by thetrev	7-May-07/4:27 PM
cutting edge improvisational phrasing with retro hip-hop under and overtones
Re: requiem for the dead generation by Prince of Void	7-May-07/4:11 PM
... cheer up; can't be that bad!
Re: Final Moon by Caducus	7-May-07/4:02 PM
kinda nice
Re: Altitude by half.italian	7-May-07/3:56 PM
an unwinding coil, eh? ... wassat? helium whispers is nice
Re: Snow by MacFrantic	7-May-07/3:48 PM
poweful opening swooned into greeting-card land
Re: LOVES ME NOT~NOBM by Radiation	1-Feb-07/6:19 AM
take no notice, you can only get better; this is far superior to your earlier effort
Re: Instruction by Dovina	26-Nov-06/5:49 PM
"were future world so kind" perhaps? :).....aaahh i see, a sense-timing paradox thing ... nice
Re: weather poem part 1: the wolf journal by nypoet22	21-Oct-06/7:02 AM
well; got blown away by this; took it slow and let it speak to me , then saw all this sour-face bitchin and wondered what that was all about. in some of us poetry is a continuum and it being broken up in chunks merely a convention ( sez he pompously)... anyhow, 8 for now and will return to it later