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LOVES ME NOT~NOBM (Lyric) by Radiation
I complicated the lives by falling in love with him... I complicated the lives, now I'm losing my only love... I don't know why I had to try, living my life on the other side, now I'm so confused, I don't know what to do... He loves me He loves me not She loves me She loves me not He loves me He loves me not She loves me She loves me not I started blurring the lines 'cause I didn't care. I started crossing the line 'cause you were never there. Nowhere to turn, no one to help, It's almost ike I don't even know myself, but I have to choose, I don't know what to do... He loves me He loves me not She loves me She loves me not He loves me He loves me not She loves me He loves me He loves me not She loves me She loves me not He loves me He loves me not She loves me She loves me not LOVES ME NOT

Up the ladder: Supposition Now
Down the ladder: Prescription of Pain

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Arithmetic Mean: 0.5
Weighted score: 4.7865834
Overall Rank: 11260
Posted: January 30, 2007 8:23 PM PST; Last modified: January 30, 2007 8:23 PM PST
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[1] pete @ 62.56.56.216 | 1-Feb-07/6:19 AM | Reply
take no notice, you can only get better; this is far superior to your earlier effort
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