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Lustlets of longing (Free verse) by bharat shekhar
Little spurting stress busters,
leaking tributaries without a source-
ride up up up the tip of craving,
carve courses down carnal valley-
water sports, wet weather reports,
tie ups in dungeons and forts.
Thus desire dribbles on paper.
He crumples the now limp appendage,
back inside his lonely pyjamas.
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Posted: April 29, 2007 1:39 AM PDT; Last modified: April 29, 2007 1:39 AM PDT
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