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Free verse № 129064

Life is not serious

by daggatolar

Member since 2004 · Posted 1 Aug 2005 · 3 comments

washed white this paint the skin hides... the marshed' remains of disaster publish this loud God can forgive all sins but who forgives God his own sin against Being and not being can man - the inventor turn out his own thought the word and the creator and heed the three ways to heaven "forgive God, forgive others,and forgive yourself" and forget...life is not serious enough to be serious

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[10] pennymarie 1-Aug-05/11:33 AM Reply
wow, so true how many blame God first then other people places and things... forgiveness is the way to heaven? makes one think about the bitterness eating at the hearts of many indiviguals.. great
Penny
[n/a] ALChemy 2-Aug-05/12:14 AM Reply
God spoke us into being so that some day we might return the favor.
[7] MacFrantic 2-Aug-05/11:07 AM Reply
A bit jumbled. *7*