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Bonded (Free verse) by Skamper
Silk - tell me a story blooded and gory of man's foolish ways and how you managed to create even participate in such thunder He rolled up a number his eyes flashed beneath the flare I crashed fell at his feet he lit up the smoke drew my face in the haze my story I told… he seemed pleased raised me to my knees Gave me the smoke - Shotgun stretched out on his throne to me alone he called I felt the love his cold hands clutching silken strands that moved rhythmically in his lap He sighed... Welcome back

Up the ladder: A country called Cha
Down the ladder: Warlord

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.6
Weighted score: 5.4291306
Overall Rank: 3021
Posted: June 14, 2007 5:40 PM PDT; Last modified: June 14, 2007 5:40 PM PDT
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Comments:
[8] pete @ 62.56.83.50 | 14-Jun-07/5:46 PM | Reply
wow...lol...catcha later
[9] Dovina @ 72.161.151.195 | 15-Jun-07/8:35 AM | Reply
Something like the comfort in my recent one. Nice job.
[n/a] Skamper @ 202.6.130.10 | 16-Jun-07/10:40 AM | Reply
wow guys - your comments are weirdly comforting. thanks :)
[8] drnick @ 216.144.215.157 | 17-Jun-07/6:59 PM | Reply
Dark and erotic, like your mother.
[n/a] Skamper @ 202.6.130.121 > drnick | 19-Jun-07/2:07 AM | Reply
lol - NICE!
[8] lmp @ 141.154.134.3 | 18-Jun-07/7:37 AM | Reply
if this is really as erotic as it sounds... seems like a scene out of some "master - servant" relationship. a little oral pleasure as a welcome back?

not sure what the narrator's "story" is really...
[n/a] Skamper @ 202.6.130.121 > lmp | 19-Jun-07/2:05 AM | Reply
can't get any closer than satan and his maiden...just checking in
[8] lmp @ 141.154.134.3 > Skamper | 28-Jun-07/4:04 PM | Reply
checking in?
[n/a] Skamper @ 202.6.132.59 > lmp | 3-Jul-07/7:26 PM | Reply
I'm his maiden - I check in now and then, make reports, receive new assignments and tend to needs...
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