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Bonded (Free verse) by Skamper

Silk - tell me a story blooded and gory of man's foolish ways and how you managed to create even participate in such thunder He rolled up a number his eyes flashed beneath the flare I crashed fell at his feet he lit up the smoke drew my face in the haze my story I told… he seemed pleased raised me to my knees Gave me the smoke - Shotgun stretched out on his throne to me alone he called I felt the love his cold hands clutching silken strands that moved rhythmically in his lap He sighed... Welcome back

lmp 18-Jun-07/7:37 AM
if this is really as erotic as it sounds... seems like a scene out of some "master - servant" relationship. a little oral pleasure as a welcome back?

not sure what the narrator's "story" is really...




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