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Instruction (Free verse) by Dovina
âHow is it in the world with you,â
he asked in small-talk jest.
âHope itâs kind and not instructive.â
I laughed and told him truly,
âIf the world were kind, would I be here?â
adjusting words to fit what was?â
âWould I rather sail to Barcelona,
or ride a bike along the coast,
a day or two to south Laguna,
âor live again the day that dawned
solution for a counour,
pulled by raucous points,
âor be hiking like John Muir,
cold along Sierraâs crest,
noticing a house fly
at thirteen thousand feet,
âor digging âtaters in the dirt
from where I planted eyes last spring,
then weeded, watered, waited?
âOf course Iâd rather do those things
when future world was kind
and offered few adversities,
had little to instruct.â
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Weighted score: 5.384202
Overall Rank: 3234
Posted: November 25, 2006 11:22 AM PST; Last modified: November 25, 2006 11:22 AM PST
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I'm such a nerd.