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Band Ten Hut (Other) by LintyWeenis
I step out on to the field. Every eye is on me. Watching. Waiting for me to slip. I won't. Not this time. I march out in perfect step, relishing every ache that jolts my body. It reminds me that I'm here. It reminds me I'm alive. As I come to a halt and put that cold metal to my lips I smile at all the pretty faces.

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.428571
Weighted score: 5.384202
Overall Rank: 3242
Posted: September 13, 2004 7:32 PM PDT; Last modified: September 13, 2004 7:32 PM PDT
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[n/a] LintyWeenis @ 152.163.101.10 | 13-Sep-04/7:33 PM | Reply
You probably won't get this unless you've been in a Marching Band before. And if you haven't, I hope that this poem helps paint a picture.
[10] Dan garcia-Black @ 66.159.217.143 | 13-Sep-04/11:53 PM | Reply
I can't blow horn worth a damn but I understand 'cause I play harp in a blues band.
[3] Bluemonkey @ 170.141.68.2 | 15-Sep-04/11:10 AM | Reply
No.
[9] edpeterson @ 68.79.13.227 | 16-Sep-04/9:06 AM | Reply
love it
[n/a] Sasha @ 69.138.240.116 | 19-Sep-04/10:24 AM | Reply
Wow. Your own self opinion was almost as accurate as the anatomically fitting username you've picked.
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